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Kinetic Text - The Ramones Rockaway Beach

This is the stage I am currently at with my Kinetic Text Assignment. Timing is key for this and I am doing my best to get the timing perfect. Now that I have most of my words layed out I am unsure how to make it more interesting to the viewers  so any suggestions would be greatly appreciated!
 
This first video is my first attempt at this song. Because the song is so fast I thought it would be a good idea to hve very few words coming up on the screen at any one time. After the first few lines it became boring when I had to watch it back over. I needed to somehow make it more exciting.
 
My second attempt (second video) I tried to make it more interesting. I put sentences on the screen rather than just single words and I am hoping to add in more pictures where necessary, I'm still unsure wheather this will make it more interesting to the viewer.
 
Kinetic Text - The Ramones Rockaway Beach
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Kinetic Text - The Ramones Rockaway Beach

Showing my progress for my Kinetic Text Assignment in C.G.I

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