As I said, Rand Paul (1914-1996), who is a United States artistic director. His most famous design is a design company logo.  The MoMA museum has his own work. I saw the ten post in the museum. I like that style, so I choose him. One of Paul Rand artwork is "Interfaith Day, 1951". This work is nice, but the poster font layout is too compact, all close together. So I improved a bit. I moved the font to the below to display. However, let me tangled is, locations, dates, and other words, how to post it. Also, especially font design. Although I replaced by Times New Roman, I felt it is not amazing. With the design and font color, for example, to how best to combine with posters. I think I need to continue to improve the poster.
The other work is called IBM 1982. This poster is consisting of one eye, a bee, a "m". Poster background is black. I think the black is the best color. However, the poster content is too middle of the post. I moved them little upper of posters. Then the lower left corner of the words is too small. I enlarge them, and recreative the location. After the changes, I think the poster much better. Nevertheless, one of the points makes me uncomfortable is the poster seems to have too much blank, and content is too less. I think the poster might be in need of more content. However, I had not thought about what content is needed now.
     Finally, I want to point out, the most important thing in the post is principal needs outstanding, and typography needs neat.
 
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